WEEK TWO PEER FEEDBACK

During class we were matched up with a random class mate so that we could critique each others creative process. Graham Herman was the classmate that I was matched with and it was a pleasure to meet. After reading the editorial that I chose he asked me what my understanding was about the topic at hand. After explaining to him he definitely agreed that the sketches matched the project and appropriately portraid a point of a perspective. Ultimately the sketches don't really show much of a direction because it still doesn't effectively communicate to the audience. There wasn't enough symbolism in my concepts and I need do more brainstorming.